Mystique

First of let me just say that this is a gorgeous piece.

Now, I do agree that the omission of the gun would have been a good option, it seems a bit pointless in this picture. But the other critique said that there should be more "Definition" between the breasts, and I think that's they're wrong. The folds on the breasts are perfect, the problem lies in her right breast (her right, not the viewers). It would be at more of a side angle, and here you have it very flat. It gives the impression that's she's wearing a chest-binder shirt underneath her outfit. The nipple should be more farther from the viewer on that breast.

The front part of her belt/skirt thing is a little bit awkward to me as well. At the top, nearest to the skull belt, it looks a little bit "forced". I'm not sure how to describe it, maybe like you were trying a little too hard? The fabric there looks very stiff, not like fabric at all. Maybe if you'd left out a couple of folds there that would have helped.

Also; her knee is very "Wonky". It looks broken, actually. I'm really not even sure how to describe it but I almost think it looks like maybe your hand wobbled or something? If not, then I would definitely recommend looking up photos of knees and legs to study the knee a bit more because it's very strange in this picture.

Other than that I have to say; I love the piece, it's very well done. Great job C: